CoursesClear Homepage on a Phone
One offer
Most solo homepages list everything the owner can do. It feels safer. If you mention strategy, workshops, retainers, and a newsletter, surely someone will want one of them. On a phone the opposite happens. Five offers read as no offer. The visitor cannot tell what you actually want them to understand, so they choose nothing.
One offer means one main thing in the first screen. It does not mean you only sell one thing for the rest of your working life. Other work can sit lower on the page, or on its own page, in plain language. The homepage leads with the job you most want a cold visitor to grasp.
How to choose it
Use three questions, in this order. What do people already pay you for, most weeks? What can you say in one sentence with no footnote? What has a next step you can name — a call, an email, a booking, or a brief?
If two offers are genuinely equal, pick the one a stranger grasps fastest. You can change it later. A clear offer you might adjust next month is more useful than a list you never have to defend. The homepage is allowed to be specific.
Signs the first screen is still a muddle
- The first screen uses “and” more than once to join services.
- Several buttons carry the same visual weight.
- A friend reads it and says you do a bit of everything.
- Deleting a service makes you anxious, because the page is doing your explaining for you.
The other services are not banned. They are demoted. A line such as “I also run team days. Ask if that is what you need.” is honest and quiet. It does not compete with the main sentence, and it does not need its own button.
A rewrite you can do in a notes app
Write “I help [person] to [result].” Add “by [method]” only when the method is how a client would recognise the work. “With a weekly call for twelve weeks” is a method. A phrase built from jargon is not. Then read the sentence to someone who does not do your job. If they pause and ask you to say it again in normal words, it is still about you, not about them.
After the sentence is plain, go back to the current homepage and list every distinct thing it offers, including downloads and “learn more” paths. Anything other than your one sentence moves down or off. You are not throwing the work away. You are stopping it from shouting over the main line.
Do this now
- List every distinct offer on the current homepage, including free downloads and vague “learn more” paths.
- Circle the one people already pay you for most often. If you are not trading yet, circle the one you can explain in a single breath.
- Write the one-sentence version. If it contains two “and”s, split it and keep the half a stranger understands first.
- In a draft of the first screen, remove the other offers. If one of them still matters, add a single quiet line under the main sentence. Do not give it a button yet.